All Comments on 'Affair of the Trainee & the Manager Ch. 02'

Wjhich is better, superb or outstanding? Whichever, this one is another "10000". Please? Another continuation? Maybe she wants you so much that she wants to make it permanent by being fertilized with your baby? You two could still remain married legally to her husband and your wife.

I really and truely loved your story, but the thing that kinda had me annoyed was all of the words,"loving". It was still a wonderful story I just wish that you wouldn't put that in there so much. It's just to redundant, and annoying. Loved the story still and I hope you keep writing romance submissions.

The second chapter of this warm and tender love story is carefully constructed, with a fine plot that holds the attention of the reader throughout.