All Comments on 'After a Birthday to Remember'

by NB_Marg

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Lee2012Lee2012almost 11 years ago
I sense a public...

Gang bang cumming on.

Aubrey seems like a coniving cockhound with voyeuristic tendencies. But then, Marge I think you enjoy the idea of being watched too, hmmmmm?

Bring on more

Lee

BAD BOY BILLBAD BOY BILLalmost 11 years ago
Good Detail

Marge like your get down nasty story telling..like clothes detail I can picture you sucking me right now..yummy mummy..

playman64playman64almost 11 years ago
WOW

WOW. That is a fucking hot story.

Three lucky guys.

Especially loved The anal part.

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifeover 10 years ago
Even better x

Wow after the great part one I amazed that this part continues in the great same fashion... loved the ass fucking you took. Very similar to something I did with some younger lads recently x x x

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very hot story

Marg, your account was very erotic and had me "gripped", however I'm not keen on the blackmail line that it took (even if you are not that reluctant to go along with the gang bang that will surely follow!). I prefer sex to be fully consensual and that all parties willing indulge in activities however dirty and depraved they may appear :-)

I'll still read part 3 of your time in the city xx

MW

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Plans for CITY HOTEL

1 Aubrey has been scheduling groups in three hour slots. Small young cocks first. Entrance fee to be paid to him on entry. Donation jars available when they leave. (One for cash. One for extra cum.)

2 The room is booked booked for 4 nights Marg will pay from donations.

3 food delivered by pizza delivery or drinking donation jar.

4 After first 18 hours local football teems get 11 plus coach for 6 specials any cheerleader can enter at any time to eat.

5 if Marg passes out, no throat fucking till she speaks again.

6 Voyers must add to cum jar or leave after 33 minutes.

7 If a big dog sneaks in give him free rein

8 If two cocks double in her cunt at the same time it's a 2fer special

9 Tell your friends

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Very erotic. TYSM.

Would you consider having Marg come on to her friend Bea??

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Part 3 suggestions

You could have Bea join Marg at the hotel. Then the 2 of them could get royally fucked.. Or you could have Marg contact her favorite boyfriends and let them handle the situation for her. Then follow that up with a part 4 where she pays them back for what the did for her. One of her BF could be a cop. Or a lawyer.

jrt20jrt20about 8 years ago

very hot. share more experiences, please

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