All Comments on 'After Class Pt. 01'

Nice start but too short for my taste. I hope you are not going to be like some writers and make one short page one chapter and continue the story. Good luck!

Better be lots more chapters

A good effort for your first story but the ending was too abrupt. I would hope that you do a follow up because this relationship has potential and needs to be taken further.

Well that's a good preface, now we need the rest of the chapters. There's lots of scope here for a great story.

For those that like this try reading "The bitch". Use the story title search to help you find it.

Bites down on her clit? Ow. Wet hole? As a woman- it’s not a hole. New to reading this stuff, but these are all by guys, yes?