All Comments on 'After-Date Dessert'

I liked this story; it was hot and there's romance here that speaks to the optimist in me. If Steiner has really turned over a new leaf he will need to set his other slaves free. In that case, if he's to stay out of prison he must either have kept his appearance/identity secret or has such total control over them that he's in no danger of having police sketches on the six o clock news (which seems very unlikely). The next chapters could go in so many directions. If he still has the urge of his old proclivities does Paige come on board? Or if he's her protector what happens next that he needs to protect her from?

First of all this story is perfect,you incorporate all the elements of dominant and submissive behavior without overdoing it. I have a few ideas for the next one if Steiner has left his old life behind,maybe a rival slaver captures Paige sending Steiner on a journey to find his lost love. If Steiner is still in the business maybe he brings Paige into the business as his partner,using her as bait to capture both men and women. These are just some suggestions that I would like to see you work with. Either way whatever happens next will be good

More! He should reveal his full, true nature to her BUT she will test his limits further than he ever dreamed possible... *evil smile*

You are such a gifted writer!

I just gotta say, I'm pretty sure this caused one of the best orgasms of my life.