by NewAgeErotica
Love the new chapter! Anything about a girl becoming a complete submissive sex slave for a guy gives me a raging hard on! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please tell me you are already almost done with it!
I have always liked this story because I have always wanted to cut loose and slut it up like Alicia. But this chapter has delved into my deepest fantasy of being completely owned by a man and treating like a piece of meat for anyone's use. I have no longer any control and he tells me what to do and who to fuck. Having me service all his friends on a whim or even pimp me out to the land lord for rent or extrenely cheap like a $5 blow job or $20 fuck or something.
Keep this up I have already read it three times and it's only been out a day. Please please please tell me your already working on chapter 16. I don't think I can wait to long for it.
She wants her "feelings" respected. Wants to be treated like a Lady.
WTF is she yappin about? NOT going to happen!!!!
Not as long she keeps doing whatever seems fun right now.
Good luck Ally. Hope you find it....***
my new favorite chapter, man! Any idea of when you'll finish chapter 16? A few weeks or so?
Please give us a status on chapter 16! I have blue balls waiting for it!
You've gone too far and destroyed the heroine of the story. Really stupid.
Who said she was a heroine? Alicia was never meant to be some sort of character that anybody should cheer for. That said, "adolescent bullying" has not "won." She finds herself in a difficult situation - one that scares her and excites her at the same time. If you're looking for a story about a woman who has no depth and goes around fucking people left and right light-heartedly - this is not the story for you.
Thank you for your grown up review of the story. lol
Loyal reader and have been reading them since the first one was released. I know you must get this question a lot, but I'm curious on when the next chapter will be released? Sorry, but I'm very interested!
I appreciate everyone's patience.
This would be a LOT easier if this were some kind of job or source of income for me. I'd have 100 chapters of this story if that were the case lol
I have a lot of ideas for this story and where it can go (100 chapters isn't a stretch - I have that many ideas!)
It's tough to balance other projects and write (which I love to do).
Perhaps you make a Patreon and get people to donate a few bucks every month?
This is the link if anyone wishes to make a donation to help me write more work!
www.patreon.com/naefiction
This is a great series and it might make an awesome comic. Maybe a site that publishes a panel every couple days might generate revenue with advertising on it. "The Rock Cocks" for example (http://www.therockcocks.com/comic/page-1) or The "Naughty in Law" series (http://myhentaicomics.com/index.php/The-Naughty-In-Law).