All Comments on 'After Hours at Self Checkout Ch. 02'

Such a beautiful story of a pair of individuals who got to play the roles they wanted to play and change the roles up as they went along depending on the emotions of the moment. Nobody got abused or laughed at and they might have actually found the love that they both wanted and needed just by taking a chance and being open and honest. A brilliant piece of writing that tells a wonderful story on the surface while having an important lesson underneath. Thank you for this story.

Fun story, hot sex scenes, my only criticism is the dialogue between them while having sex seemed very contrived, unnatural, as though they were reading from script. Over all though, great story, got me hard as a rock

Very good

Loved the story, romantic and loving

Can't wait for more if your writing

I enjoyed it

Thank you

This was fantastic. Thanks for posting such awesome work. I want to see where there relationship goes.

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Nice story and fresh writing! Thank you!

Very nice,

You never know what might when you meet the right person.

Would love for this chapter in there life to continue into chapter 3.