All Comments on 'After Midnight, in the Kitchen'

by yellowjacket66

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Karen turned my head and kissed me on the mouth. "Turnabout is fair play."

yes yes yes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Speaking of slip-ups such as nightgowns on backwards, is "Walt" really named Carl? You called him that once. Good story, though!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 2 years ago

Fabulous! And also hot, even very hot. 5*~~JB

26thNCuck26thNCuckabout 2 years ago

5 Stars

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wargamer/twentyseven….why the hell do you even open stories here? You know what they are going to be about. This whole section is like this. Just fucking stop crying when that’s what you find. You are pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My husband wants me to seduce his friend when we go visit them next month. This story has me thinking ab it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

grerat story-well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story-Best literotica story yet

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story.. needs a follw[-on

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Stars. Nice story, can't wait for part 2.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

I like the way you write, short ( maybe too short)? But nicely thought out and put down with nice character design and good descriptions of sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

a little difficult to read who was saying what to who and all rather rushed. Sex should be l,,o,,n,,g and slow. Yours was over and done before it started.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Penny’s a cheating slut. She just went along with whatever he did

Long enough for him to cum in her unprotected cunt.

That’s in no way resisting being fucked. She wanted it & only had remorse after the fact remembering she was unprotected. Total slut!

Bill S.

WetheNorthWetheNorth11 months ago

quote if she had a good night's sleep. I said I did unquote

Sloppy writing

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is supposed to be a "Loving Wives" story. If this is your concept of love, I'd hate to be your spouse.

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