All Comments on 'After Ripeness Fades'

This story can't receive enough fives or 100%s in my opinion. Well written with apt descriptions of characters and action made this a sensual, erotic read.

I especially appreciated the delicate balance of sexual exploration, seduction, non-consent and submission. I have a few ideas for your next work. Will send you an email. Thanks for your contribution.

Nice story to my liking. Write a second chapter, and have them pierce and tattoo the slave heavily. to really humiliate her and mark her up permanent as a sex slave

I agree with an anonymous commenter, Not enough 5's.

Thank You for doing this Mr. Fast, Much better than I could have hoped to have done anything as similar.

G

I love all of your stories, hope you will continue writing in the future. The over-the-top gangbangs and general humiliations isn't for everyone, but I certainly enjoy reading about them.

Loved it. Made me wet and I had to cum about half-way through and again later when I finished it. Can't ask for more than that.

You could expound & add more chapters in your fast & sloppy fashion.

Of course when I say decent I mean delightfully depraved in a decent way.

this is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. great story.