by RobinZephyr
You are a very good story teller. I'm enjoying this so very much! Thank you
I do apologize for the long delay between chapters. Thank you for sticking with me. It's been very difficult to focus with everything going on. Chapter 4 was submitted today, so it should be released in a few days. I think you will enjoy it :)
I have hopes that chapter 5 will not take as long...but I can't control the pandemic or the political situation, so I'll do my best.
Favorite line: “No one's biological or emotional needs should determine their level of respect in the community.” Amen and hallelujah!
On the part 1
The best fuck text I've ever read.
The author takes his time to draw the reader into the extremely subtle threesome in an almost professional manner, using his partner's fear of shame to get the reader to overcome it themselves.
I find it lovingly awesome how two different types of successful fucking are developed side by side, with Graham's natural playfulness of course leaving Avery's possessiveness far behind.
I think it's a shame that the real threesome, the three of them making love at the same time and in the same rhythm, doesn't happen. Because threesome lust is something different from the accompaniment of two fuckers by a third. The love threesome is the culmination of the urge to do each other good sexually without reservation. This doesn't just lead to the explosive lust of getting off, but to long-lasting and intimately horny bliss. To the joy of threesomes. To the horniest love pleasure there is - to the bliss of love. peter@saluti.info