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- After the End Ch. 04
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All Comments on 'After the End Ch. 04'
by RobinZephyr
- 10 Comments
Anonymousover 3 years agoI am a straight woman, a widow, and must say that I enjoyed the tenderness and love expressed by these two lovers. Thank you for an excellent and eye opening read.
ShadowRosieover 3 years agoI'm a straight woman, twice divorced. I hate that dom, Julian. He's a bonafide asshole and will end up really hurting Avery when the time comes that he sees someone more cute and more willing as Avery begins to mature and his looks become more adult. Makes me wonder how long before Julian wants to add a third person to their relationship. Boom! He breaks Avery.
RobinZephyrover 3 years agoAuthor@ShadowRosie, I am surprised and disappointed to hear that the character of Julian has inspired hatred. Can you explain what you read that caused you to interpret him so negatively? It certainly was not intentional. I strongly suggest that you go back to read the first three chapters. There is a reason that the activities in chapter four didn't happen until then. I don't want anyone to have a negative experience with this story, as it's meant to be fun and romantic, so please let me know your thoughts.
To those who enjoyed the story - thank you for reading and sharing your feedback!
TheShy_ReservedGuyover 3 years agoYour capabilities as a writer, whether that be be erotica or anything else is just mindblowing. The whole time it felt like reading a New York Best Seller. The storyline, the buildup, the characters, especially Avery, the emotional attachments and my god, the sex..... Everthing was just blissfully perfect. I am very much eagerly waiting for the next chapters. Huge expectations ❤
Anonymousover 3 years agoLove the soft bdsm element, gave me some ideas to explore and tease my male sub. Loves how affirming Julian is. Need him as my boyfriend 😂
Anonymousabout 3 years agoYou are such an incredible talent! The way you weild words like a precision tool, and the build up of this story is just so wonderful. Amazing job
dnsontnalmost 2 years agoThe intensity of this chapter is mind blowing. I can’t say when I’ve read anything even close to this level of eroticism. Well done. Holy smoke from five stars burning HOT!
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