All Comments on 'After The Fact'

Pretty good first story, well constructed. I'll be looking forward to the next one.

I liked it! I enjoyed the setting and main character. I hope there's more.

You WILL be writing us some more, won't you? I mean, you can't be leaving it there, in the middle of some car-graveyard, although you did it with a well-placed humorous sentence? Think of all the sick perverts you're dooming to wonder about 'what happens next'. I, for one, am about to make my way to a car-wrecker to see if I can have an itch scratched. It's hard being a sick pervert. Please take us into consideration and write more.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Yes, I will most definitely be writing more. There is at least a part two, maybe even a three to this story coming soon...