All Comments on 'After the Funeral'

ur character structure was good but need more description of their physical looks...it was a great story but who was benny, brother, father, or uncle ?

Good writing!

I missed your stories. And this is a good one, sensitively told. Could use some more character development, but can stand alone as-is. But the technicals really need work. Just one more read-through before clicking "submit" would have caught the obvious flubs.

My quibbles will follow via "Send Feedback", but this one really caught my eye: "Isaac wasn't pone for nerves". I couldn't resist saying "That

was corny".

You can tell a story sweetly, for sure.

among inter-racial and inter-faith. TK U MLJ LV NV