All Comments on 'After the Kidnap'

by KeithD

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer4 months ago

I figured this one out early on in the story, but that did nothing to diminish its impact. Chuck just seemed to have a little too much power over Christian not to be the third kidnapper. The danger in this had a different feel to it than your spy stories. This had a certain unexpected foreboding affect every time Chuck's presents were known that gave a different kind of edginess to this. Another excellent example of first-rate story telling!

GrayerUnionGrayerUnion4 months ago

As usual I echo my dear friend MarcLuciFer.

I read with a chillness in my body, after an initial search about Brookings OR. I loved it Keith, loved it!

Calico75Calico754 months ago

Excellent. Captivating.

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