All Comments on 'After the Move...'

Sometimes a little jerky, a little more editing will fix that, but none the less a good story. Placement of details sometimes will stall the flow to the intent of the story. At least that's my thought, which really don't mean jack-s*** to most who know me. Thanks for the post.....Rich

But thought this was okay. Well written and sexy as well

I like your style of writing. Very seductive. Sounds like something that should be experienced ;]