All Comments on 'After the Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
excellent story

After the party is a well-conceived story, although its brevity is somewhat disappointing. The reader should check out the author's later stories, especially Fun at Work; the quality of the writing has only gotten better with time. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I honestly don't get why people left such high marks. And given that you wrote some awesome stories, this one just doesn't live up to expectations. The constant repetition of spoken language, the excessive use of exclamation points, they really take away from the quality of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more more more

great story can't wait for ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Thanks!

Very well-written, and hot as hell.

Julie in Los Gatos

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
IT'S GREAT!!!

This is one of the hottest stories i've read, there should be a sequal to this

verybigoneverybigoneover 12 years ago
Amazing story

This is one of the best and HOTTEST stories I ever read

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