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by ClaireM

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SLC-Ohio almost 19 years ago

no passion, really no story at all, and no party

Sorry Claire but this was terrible. The first person present tense style will turn off virtually all readers. You are not telling a story or reciting anything - maybe you think you are - but the present tense always suggests that you are making it up as you go along.

SLC-Ohio