All Comments on 'After the Storm'

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GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyover 12 years ago
Um... Wow... What?

Yikes. I am unsure what to make of this turn of events. Tune in tomorrow for more of... As the Penduluum Swings...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great writing, but where's it going ?

The psychology and the build up are fantastic, absolutely credible. But much too raw for pleasure at the end. Brilliant writing though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing

I feel lile this reads more like a story than pornography. I think its amazing. I am in love with Julian and I think their relationship is so interesting. I love how the beginning stories started, just rapid fire dialogue. I know its been forever, but I hope you take up this story line again. I wish there was a whole novel of Julian and Kate to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hmmm i like it

at frst i was kinda like i dont know if i like this or not and by the time i got through all ur submissions, im waiting for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Omg

Well this is my favorite story. Ever. Great job!

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