All Comments on 'After-Work Adventure'

ANOTHER WELL WRITTEN SEXY STORY FROM LADY DI FULL OF EROTIC CONTENT AND VERY EROTIC.SOON GOT ME WELL AROUSED.THANK YOU.

It needs serious editing and grammer work. I gave up reading after just a short bit not even a page. Why is the too frequent use of ... of which 99.9999% can be removed using proper grammer as almost all cases it was improperly used. In some locations it appeared so much that few real words seemed to be there. Even a grade school stuedent wouldn't make this bad of grammer.

Unlike some here on lit I don't read stories for their literary style. or grammatical correctness. I read stories hoping they will create vivid scenes in my mind, and spur my sexual fantasies. This story did that to perfection. Thank you for the mental images you've created. Roy