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by milkmage

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
confusing

Even though you gave us the terms at the top the strange language made it really impossible to follow and get into this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Could have been good....

But ruined by all of the stupid madeup words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I agree!

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