All Comments on 'Afterparty Birthday'

Perhaps the story could go a bit further? Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

great story. its has legs, you should continue it.

One of the best I've read in quite a while. The pacing was good, making us understand how Colin felt without overdoing it and making him into a pathetic looser. Nice touch with Michelle, without too much. (Although I think it is 'alright' rather than 'all right' in this case - bonus points for introducing me to 'inveigle' the perfect word at the perfect time.) You are a good writer and great storyteller!

I think Little Megan needs a sibling.

Needs part two.

Needs part 2 where they both realize it can't just be 1 time and where he tries to make a go with Michelle or even another woman but can't get his aunt out of his mind and in the end they realize they are in love with each other