by flamekitten
i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up.
Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u!
Kayla
i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up. Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u! Kayla
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i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up. Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u! Kayla