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by Ambient4190

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cageysea9725cageysea9725almost 3 years ago

Seems a little rapey to me.

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

The mighty Casey struck out.

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

*** Thanks for the read.

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOnealmost 3 years ago

Short, sweet, to the point, and not very entertaining. I've read some of your other offerings and this one seemed a little rushed and amateurish. Akin to a 5th graders Social Studies report. You had a good concept which would have been better with a little more detail, emotion and fleshing out of the situation. While not the worst I've read on Lit by far, I hold your skills to a higher caliber and can't wait for your next story.

juanviejojuanviejoalmost 3 years ago

It wasn't very good...two stars!

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