Gonna try reading this, but the first part is just too confusing. Too much tech type explanation and information in one hit. Surely could give it out in small bits as it becomes relevant.
If anyone wants to write a sequel, adaption, or alternate ending to any of my stories, that will leave me ecstatic. You have full permission. Just mention me and my story. George Anderson's "February Sucks", really disturbed me. I have 11 sequels to it in various stages ...