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Click here"Honey," I said, "we need to talk."
I saw Leila bite her lip and whimper. There was fear in her gaze.
"No, it's not what you think!" I said, and she started crying.
"No, Jake, I didn't do anything... honest. Please don't divorce me," she was sobbing as she kept her hands over her face.
I let her carry on for a minute or two and then cut it off before it got out of hand.
"So, tell me what happened?" I asked.
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Characters:
Jake -- special forces soldier, returning home
Leila -- Jake's wife
Randy -- Jake's father
Joanna -- Jake, Angie, and Randy's neighbor in Indiana
Angie -- Jake's mother
Bruce -- Angie's man-friend
Charlie -- Joanna's husband
Nancy -- Jake's sister
I know it's just a story, but many parts of it happen in real life. His mother was a real slut and very selfish as was my wife of 13 years when she divorced me. I didn't leave her alone like our MC did but I got old on her. She was 19 I was 25 when we married for the wrong reason, she was pregnant so I stood up and married her. She already had 2 year old. My job wasn't easy and I was wore out at 35. The marriage lasted and 3 years before she started going out to bars without me then she finally moved out and got her own apartment. There was nothing to fight fo she had 'fallen out of love' with me she said. So I gave her a divorce. She left the girls with me so she could go out and hunt men without have the girls to hamper her endeavors. Oh, incase you considering divorce (yeah she wanted on) I'm a do-it-you-selfer so I did. Only cost a $100 bucks to file no lawyer needed got book and filled out all the paperwork. Refinanced the house and gave her half, end of story except I lots the girls and that hurts at least I never bad mouth their mother but of course the kids blamed me for whatever reason. Why hang on f someone doesn't want you. Besides her cheating she was a very selfish person and gave no thought how it affected the girls. Being a pretty mechanic/technician I couldn't hold a job for 2 years my head was so screwed up, oh well, life goes on and it did. Just remember you don't need to spend $10K on lawyer just keep it civil and rational.
That was a good change for a story, nicely plotted and written, I was just going to moan that you left it hanging when I spotted you have a part two, great, off to read it now.
Second time. I did not get as much from the first as I did the second. Thank you, I would give it a five
to patillie:
I could change my mind and neuter all of you smartmouths.
However, I find some of the comments are helpful in pushing the story out.
I like your stories, esp the biographical ones, but kind of a pussy move to eliminate scoring. At least you still face the comments.
Incredibly well written story. You did a great job unflinchingly describing all points of view of the major characters. Angie's explanation of human sexuality to her son, and explaining the facts of life for pretty women was also dead-on. As well as the need for mixing up love-making with some plain old animalistic bed-destroying debauchery.
And the way you settle story up, with the loyal son at first accepting his father's side of everything, and then so convincingly yanking the rug out from under the reader's feet!
And the way you worked in the jeopardy his own marriage was in! Just awesomely well done!
good, very interesting, just rather long by a page or so as it got kind of repetitious.
I find that most people who don't like Jake's mother are the BTB types. You know the kind. Slugs drinking beer and getting fat on their recliner, expecting their wife to "be true" to them when they fail as men. Jake's father was typical of many men I saw growing up and later on as a man myself. They expect their wives to eat the shit sandwich and soldier on. Quit being a slug and be a man. If not, your wife may leave you and deservingly so. At least Angie waited until the kids were grown. She gave him chances to man up, but he was too busy watching TV or whatever the fuck. BTW. That goes for slug women, also. Slack off on your looks and sex, and you may just find yourself alone after the kids are grown. There is more pussy out there.