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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
That? I like

Well done! When fear over shadows intuition. Good Job!

Regret, could have gone either way....thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nice surprise ending! But in the end it did make sense, because it read like a fantasy, not reality. If she hadn't said no and gone, reality wouldn't have played out that way. The stories we play in our minds have the luxury of full on pleasure. But maybe that's your intention?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I don't know what to say

That was a beautiful and erotic story with a sad ending. But who knows...maybe the right decision.

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 4 years ago
Okay, He Didn’t Ask . . .

But I want to. She may understand his confusion, however, I don’t. Why was he confused? What didn’t he understand? What did she realize? Sorry I didn’t “get it.”

It was super hot, though, and the ending totally took me by surprise. I think I’m going to have to start checking out chatlines . . . 🥰

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