by Challenged
Well done! When fear over shadows intuition. Good Job!
Regret, could have gone either way....thank you.
Nice surprise ending! But in the end it did make sense, because it read like a fantasy, not reality. If she hadn't said no and gone, reality wouldn't have played out that way. The stories we play in our minds have the luxury of full on pleasure. But maybe that's your intention?
That was a beautiful and erotic story with a sad ending. But who knows...maybe the right decision.
But I want to. She may understand his confusion, however, I don’t. Why was he confused? What didn’t he understand? What did she realize? Sorry I didn’t “get it.”
It was super hot, though, and the ending totally took me by surprise. I think I’m going to have to start checking out chatlines . . . 🥰