All Comments on 'Airborne'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You! You! You!

Instant, Total, 100% TURN OFF!!!!

There is absolutely no way that a 'story' that purports to have the Reader as a participant can stand any vestige of being believable!!

Could have been a good story but since 'I' was NOT there and DID NOT take part there is no way I am going to waste my time reading it!!

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