All Comments on 'Airport Troubles'

Unclewacked,

Although the whole thing smacked of pure fantasy; well, that's what all these stories are supposed to do. I think you pulled it off admirably. Maybe I should fly more often. *grins*

she bit a breast so hard it drew blood?????? total turn off and unecessary IMO

could have done without the biting and drawing blood, yes its very realistic and this IS a fantasy, but your writing style is good, and very tasteful for the most part.

I don't care that she bit hard enough to draw blood. Anything with a lesbian guard doing that is fine with me.

A lot of gaps when characters speak to others.

I have no issue with the word bitch for I am a proponent of free speech. With that said - the word is burned out.

Every story that has a Dom & Sub relationship resort to bitch this bitch that.

The next time anyone is inclined to use this word remember this line:

"Riding in my whip hitting switches as I ride with my bitches" - MC Erotic