All Comments on 'Aisle 12'

A perfect story.

I like the idea of being unaccountably attracted to a beautiful stranger and the daring mystery that it is another woman instead of a man. You convey that well in the story and most of your writing wove a believable and erotic spell for me. There were a couple things that broke the spell for me though. In the store when they finally touch and speak, the dialogue completely stopped and the narration didn't keep the tension you had built so well. The other place was at Leslie's home after Kathy had called her husband. As Leslie was actively seducing Kathy, she said that she had never done this before. It was too contradictory, too incongruent with her actions for me to accept. Again, the spell was broken for me. Aside from these two speed-bumps, this was an enjoyable and arousing story.

Loved the instant attraction they felt for each other, and how the lust was there from the start. I'm so wet right now

This story was very psychologically stimulating, which I don't see very often in erotic writing. Great job.