All Comments on 'Alaina Discovers Her True Self'

An incredible story so far. I look forward to Alaina's future training.

Maybe you should get your facts straight. Brigham Young University is not in Salt Lake City. It is in Provo. Also, the Mormon church abolished polygamy befor Utah became a state. I was interested in seeing how the story would turn a good, married Mormon girl into a submissive, but not having your facts right to begin with made the rest unbelievable for me.

Throw your pencil or pen in the trash and find another hobby. Because there wasn't an original or clever thing here. And not a decent or likeable character in the lot. BARF!

Interesting charachters and situation. Thanks for sharing. D

Well written and well thought :-) -and there is actually possabilities for a follow up

More please