All Comments on 'Alain's Journey Ch. 01'

by jramsay42

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
2 spades

In the first two paragraphs I noticed something odd. you mention him throwing the spade into the ground before rubbing the sweat. Then he notices the other elves coming and drops his spade. Does he have two spades? :D

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