All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 16'

i woner what will Alan do when he's kidnapped? It will be interesting:)

the story has suspense which some readers like. It goes alright along the storyline.

keep on typing:-)

LW

This is getting better...I'm hooked, can't wait to find out what happens to our hero!

Your story is the best on literotica right now. Just make sure you dont always skip over the sex.

I love how you are not just about the sex and is moving the storyline. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Surprisingly stuck on this story. Not my primary kind of thing but I want to see whereit goes!