All Comments on 'ALANA Pt. 03'

by dara1833

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nthusiasticnthusiastic8 months ago

I was surprised that so much of chapter 2 was repeated, almost word for word, in chapter 3. There was only one paragraph at the end which carried on with the story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

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