All Comments on 'Alana's Final Lesson'

these are two great characters! Well done! I love the story itself, the characters are richly written, you want to know more about them, see them find a way to be together, see them in other situations. You simply make the reader BEG for MORE! I loved Elgan and Alana. I had hoped you would refer to her as a virgin too. It seems as though the story is set that way...that he is her teacher in all regards. I hope you describe them more to us in you next chapter...and there must be a next chapter.

I so see him as the possessive, jealous, lover and her as the innocent temptress. Please keep their night moving along and let's see more of them.

Great writing and story telling. I could picture it. Please continue...

It's such a pleasure to come across such a well-written and well-characterised story!