by ShadowLuver
Oh wow what an amazing, hot, great story! I was pulled in, living the action as if I were there, just enough description to get lost in and enjoy the story, and yes, get off to it. Five stars!
Excellent work; well written, story flows naturally and intensely with great imagery. It was also a "2-fer." I got off this morning when I was in the middle of the story, then reread it and got off again when I was reaching the end.
Enjoyed following the emotions, reactions and arousal from the woman's point of view; I would love to know someone like her! Your writing improves with each work, thank you for sharing your erotic imaginings (or experiences . . . ?) Hot Great Story
Amazing story. Great imagination, characters are fun, and most of all, sexy and arousing. Well-earned five stars!
Hot, hot, hot. Love your writing, so erotic and captivating. Thanks for posting.
This is a marvellous story, beautifully-paced and full of brilliant erotic imagery. The encounter with the woman at the end is an unexpected device, but is not at all contrived. Please write some more stories like this. Or maybe a sequel?
Fun blend of great sex and humor. "VaJayJay & Jizz" cocktail cracked me up; it is now my favorite term. Thoroughly enjoyed, great job.
Delightfully erotic, great imagery, imagination, and just enough detail. Well done!
Hot, sexy, great writing. Loved where she spun nude by herself for the moment, fantasizing, just out of sight of the crowds, so risky and sexy, and natural. 5*
Wonderfully erotic, great imagery and insights into emotions and sexual drive. And hot sex. A+ story.
Captivating, sexy, and fantastic writing; I felt like I was right there in the action. Wondered what it would be like to be the guy walking in on the couple in the alcove and fucking a total stranger like that. Keep picturing just stepping in and having sex right after the other guy, with people all around. Damn hot scenario,
Great story, you have a wild imagination! I read your follow up from the stranger in the Alcove’s perspective, and was intrigued to read the original. I’m sure glad I did; this story is fantastic and helps me appreciate the alternative perspective all the more.