All Comments on 'Alex - 10 Days of Torment Ch. 11'

it's look like Alex may get some action with Sabrina but I still wonder how Alex and Christ relation will evolve in the future from the little snippet we got in the first chapter it seem she was a lot more bitchy than now

another 5 star to counter balance all the 1star that you get. a better score would probably be around 4 star

Good content - frustrating experience.

I enjoyed the chapter but was frustrated by the passages in Spanish. Copying and pasting passages into Google Translate makes for an annoying reading experience. My two cents - If the story benefits from having parts written in another language I'd add brackets and translate what was written into English. That way readers who don't speak that language won't have to skip those sections or toggle back and forth between a translation engine.

ie.

"Billy stood and walked on the mattress to the head of the bed. Moving forward, he grabbed Christina by the hair, and said, "Hola hermoso. Es hora de que me chupes la polla como la mujer que eres. ¿Qué clase de mujer eres?"

"Soy una puta bonita. Ahora folla mi boca, por favor."

Would become:

Billy stood and walked on the mattress to the head of the bed. Moving forward, he grabbed Christina by the hair, and said, "Hola hermoso. Es hora de que me chupes la polla como la mujer que eres. ¿Qué clase de mujer eres? [Hello beautiful. It's time you sucked my cock like the woman you are. What kind of woman are you?]"

"Soy una puta bonita. Ahora folla mi boca, por favor. [I'm a pretty whore. Now fuck my mouth, please.]"

Kindle works amazingly well for the Spanish parts. You just highlight the section, and, in addition to copy and paste, there’s a translate button. This may be an Apple feature. Someone with Kindle for Microsoft should try it and report back.

I have read all up to this point and seems like nothing is climatic and the Spanish was a big downer. Plot is fine but nothing erotic in this at all, nothing exciting about any of this. So I won't give it any stars for your effort. Really soft.