All Comments on 'Alex'

Heart-wrenching. Even though in the back of my mind I knew it was coming... My heart, it is broken! What a beautiful sad story. As much as I'd like to have a happy ending, I understand if that's just not in the cards... But oh, how gorgeously painful this is.

Most people want a part 2 and i agree with them, but truthfully I fell as though you want us to decide the rest of the story. You said she left without her helmet, and Candy was even willing to miss flights, i bet Candy will fight for her. I just believe that. Atleast that is my part 2 to it.

I see why this one was a contest winner.

Part 2, Part 2, Part 2!!!!!!

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER!!!! IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!

Seriously, this story is great. But I think some of us readers are about to die if you dont make this an on going thing.....

A very stirring story with a heart wrenching conclusion. And, as a lot of the other comments have stated, a part II could be written. And I would read it. But I think I have my own ending envisioned and can accept that. Letting some stories "hang" with the reader either completing the story or filling in the gaps based upon the reader's own life experiences is OK. Again a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Best Regards,

Ralph

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

You can't leave me hanging like this!!!!!!

Ahhh!!!! So gooooddddddd!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens! Don't do this to meee! So sad! Haha

Please make another part. Let them find each other. Do not just leave it like this. PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER PART !

Please please por favor please make another part

This is a great start to a story. You should continue it so we can see where their relationship went. This was well written and kept me guessing.

Was amazing! Loved the read,well written. It kept me drooling in suspense and pleasure. Please thou give me more! (: xoxo

Loved it......(**,)

You simply cannot leave this here! There must be more! Please!

Well, that's just awesome. Now I'm crying and jerking off at the same time. Dammit. Dammit it all to hell.

Thank you for such a beautiful story. Cant wait for you to write again.

please finish this story I read it so many times

Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssse tell me there will be more to this!

You have alot of people waiting for the sequel......We're goin got riot if you dont. PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER NOW PLEASE!!!!

where's the next one??i am dying to see the next one...please tell me this was not the end...

You can't possibly end it like that. Out with chapter two you lazy ass! (:

Where is chapter 2?!

The story is 4 years old and the author hasn't even been on for 2 years. Yes, it really needs a second chapter to finish it but we're stuck with our own imagination.

There has to be a second chapter!! This can't be over!!

please oh PLEASE FINISH IT!

Folks : a beautiful story which invites the reader to finish in their own mind. There is no reason why everything should have an explicit conclusion.

Thank you for this well written tale.

Please write a second chapter, it can't finish like this....please :)

please finish your story.. i cannot be end like this! :)

I've never commented on literotica before even though I've been on here for years now but this is such an incredible story and I'm joining the hundreds of other readers who are absolutely clamouring for a second part to this story!! Love your writing style and the story telling/character building always makes the sex scenes so much hotter. Love your work!

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Can some other author complete this series as KillerRomance hasn't replied to any comment for a sequel??

We readers deserve a sequel so please can some other author write a sequel to it..

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!

I love the gritty, real feel of this story. I love the character build-up. I love the sex. And I love the fact that they don't sail together into the night. It happens. Maybe, one day.... in the meantime, I'll try to find more stories by Killer Romance!

This is not actually my type of story but I rated it 5 because I can see the appeal it has for its target audience. Good work.

No please add more, make it a happy ending I can't bare this. You have officially broken my heart.

Please continue this story I am dying to know what will happen next @KillerRomance

Can you please write a part 2 to this PLEASEEEEE!!!!

This was so good... I would so love if you made a part 2

This was a good story it so need a part 2 tho :)

Please make a part 2, it'd a wonderful story, I hate to see end this way.

You can't just leave it like that

finish this pls

why you start if you can't finish):

Love this story!!!! Please make a part 2! I am begging you. Please please please

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Please you can't leave this story here it's need to have another chapter please tell us you are going too write chapter 2 thank you for a great story

I've read it four times already. It's such a shame there was never a continuance of it. Thank you KillerRomance. Such a wonderful story.

This is a beautiful love story , but it would be an absolute shame if it were to end like this. There must be some reconciliation between Alex and Candy. I long to hear this story.

This is a very beautiful story and should not end like this it deserves to be continued

I am going to keep on reading this story over and over again, it really touched my heart and I hope you write more about Alex, and I hope that Candy goes looking for Alex at Alex's favorite spot near the beach since that is where she passes through hard times.😉

That ending left me with tears in my eyes pleaaase let them get back together? pretty please Oh the pain is almost physical!

Hi guys,

Thank you for all your lovely (and some not so lovely) comments. All your feedback is greatly appreciated. You'll be happy to know that I've done a re-haul of 'Alex' and will be submitting it again once the edits are complete. This may take a while; I'm shooting for July.

I'd love to have a few beta readers take a look before it's officially published. If you're keen, drop me an e-mail at k.ma.22@hotmail.com

Much love xx

Hurry hurry post a new one already :)

Pls pls write more.... gutted when i saw it was the end. This needs more chapters. Its a great story.

Hurry up

I'm gutted! It can end like this! Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is honestly one of my favorite stories on this site. Top 5, easy. I love your descriptions and the complexity of the characters. Could you tell me the name of the dessert you are describing? The "lizard tail" ? Thanks for an amazing story.

Please, please tell me there is an additional chapter! I need MORE!!!

You surely cant be cruel to end it like this....Some more...Will be very appreciative. lovely read

Please check my profile.

it surely cant end like that

This story excites me. I'm glad there's more. You're such a great writer, will be reading more soon. The character candy should have told her about the soon waiting departure. Tsk Tsk tsk

This is one of those stories you wish you would have gone to the last paragraph to read? It would have saved me much time since if this writer thinks this story was erotic they need to rethink there instincts. Waste of my time and energy...

You need to learn how to spell. How can you misspell the simplest words?

Years after I first read this, the story still tugs at my emotions the same way as it did before. No matter how many times I've re-read it. Now I finally get to read the follow up :) I haven't been on here for a while and it's a nice surprise.

I really enjoyed reading this this story can you write and let us know how it all happens if they become lovers and more hope to read more soon thank you.xx

Only just found this, wonderful story, yes the sex is only at the end but very erotic when you do get there and i, like your voters love a good story first. I don't enjoy the short straight to sex that often but fine with those who do. Any future in copying the writers who say at the beginning something about the length of the story? What ever thanks so much and off to read the next part.

That story was Amazing. I am very sad . I hope that you were able to find Alex. I usually do not write a comment and I normally do not shed a tear . But I have many right now. That was Beautiful. I hope that some how you able to find Alex.

Can you please not show that comment I thought it going private only for the author