All Comments on 'Alex'

Can you please not show that comment I thought it going private only for the author

That story was Amazing. I am very sad . I hope that you were able to find Alex. I usually do not write a comment and I normally do not shed a tear . But I have many right now. That was Beautiful. I hope that some how you able to find Alex.

Only just found this, wonderful story, yes the sex is only at the end but very erotic when you do get there and i, like your voters love a good story first. I don't enjoy the short straight to sex that often but fine with those who do. Any future in copying the writers who say at the beginning something about the length of the story? What ever thanks so much and off to read the next part.

I really enjoyed reading this this story can you write and let us know how it all happens if they become lovers and more hope to read more soon thank you.xx

Years after I first read this, the story still tugs at my emotions the same way as it did before. No matter how many times I've re-read it. Now I finally get to read the follow up :) I haven't been on here for a while and it's a nice surprise.

You need to learn how to spell. How can you misspell the simplest words?

This is one of those stories you wish you would have gone to the last paragraph to read? It would have saved me much time since if this writer thinks this story was erotic they need to rethink there instincts. Waste of my time and energy...

This story excites me. I'm glad there's more. You're such a great writer, will be reading more soon. The character candy should have told her about the soon waiting departure. Tsk Tsk tsk

it surely cant end like that

Please check my profile.

You surely cant be cruel to end it like this....Some more...Will be very appreciative. lovely read

Please, please tell me there is an additional chapter! I need MORE!!!

This is honestly one of my favorite stories on this site. Top 5, easy. I love your descriptions and the complexity of the characters. Could you tell me the name of the dessert you are describing? The "lizard tail" ? Thanks for an amazing story.

I'm gutted! It can end like this! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Pls pls write more.... gutted when i saw it was the end. This needs more chapters. Its a great story.

Hurry up

Hurry hurry post a new one already :)

Hi guys,

Thank you for all your lovely (and some not so lovely) comments. All your feedback is greatly appreciated. You'll be happy to know that I've done a re-haul of 'Alex' and will be submitting it again once the edits are complete. This may take a while; I'm shooting for July.

I'd love to have a few beta readers take a look before it's officially published. If you're keen, drop me an e-mail at k.ma.22@hotmail.com

Much love xx

That ending left me with tears in my eyes pleaaase let them get back together? pretty please Oh the pain is almost physical!

I am going to keep on reading this story over and over again, it really touched my heart and I hope you write more about Alex, and I hope that Candy goes looking for Alex at Alex's favorite spot near the beach since that is where she passes through hard times.😉

This is a very beautiful story and should not end like this it deserves to be continued

This is a beautiful love story , but it would be an absolute shame if it were to end like this. There must be some reconciliation between Alex and Candy. I long to hear this story.

I've read it four times already. It's such a shame there was never a continuance of it. Thank you KillerRomance. Such a wonderful story.

Please you can't leave this story here it's need to have another chapter please tell us you are going too write chapter 2 thank you for a great story

Love this story!!!! Please make a part 2! I am begging you. Please please please

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You can't just leave it like that

finish this pls

why you start if you can't finish):

Please make a part 2, it'd a wonderful story, I hate to see end this way.

This was a good story it so need a part 2 tho :)

This was so good... I would so love if you made a part 2

Can you please write a part 2 to this PLEASEEEEE!!!!

Please continue this story I am dying to know what will happen next @KillerRomance

No please add more, make it a happy ending I can't bare this. You have officially broken my heart.

This is not actually my type of story but I rated it 5 because I can see the appeal it has for its target audience. Good work.

I love the gritty, real feel of this story. I love the character build-up. I love the sex. And I love the fact that they don't sail together into the night. It happens. Maybe, one day.... in the meantime, I'll try to find more stories by Killer Romance!

Can some other author complete this series as KillerRomance hasn't replied to any comment for a sequel??

We readers deserve a sequel so please can some other author write a sequel to it..

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!

I've never commented on literotica before even though I've been on here for years now but this is such an incredible story and I'm joining the hundreds of other readers who are absolutely clamouring for a second part to this story!! Love your writing style and the story telling/character building always makes the sex scenes so much hotter. Love your work!

N

please finish your story.. i cannot be end like this! :)

Please write a second chapter, it can't finish like this....please :)

Folks : a beautiful story which invites the reader to finish in their own mind. There is no reason why everything should have an explicit conclusion.

Thank you for this well written tale.

please oh PLEASE FINISH IT!

There has to be a second chapter!! This can't be over!!

The story is 4 years old and the author hasn't even been on for 2 years. Yes, it really needs a second chapter to finish it but we're stuck with our own imagination.

Where is chapter 2?!

You can't possibly end it like that. Out with chapter two you lazy ass! (:

where's the next one??i am dying to see the next one...please tell me this was not the end...

You have alot of people waiting for the sequel......We're goin got riot if you dont. PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER NOW PLEASE!!!!

Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssssse tell me there will be more to this!

please finish this story I read it so many times

Thank you for such a beautiful story. Cant wait for you to write again.

Well, that's just awesome. Now I'm crying and jerking off at the same time. Dammit. Dammit it all to hell.

You simply cannot leave this here! There must be more! Please!

Loved it......(**,)

Was amazing! Loved the read,well written. It kept me drooling in suspense and pleasure. Please thou give me more! (: xoxo

This is a great start to a story. You should continue it so we can see where their relationship went. This was well written and kept me guessing.

Please please por favor please make another part

Please make another part. Let them find each other. Do not just leave it like this. PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER PART !

Ahhh!!!! So gooooddddddd!!!!!! I'm dying to know what happens! Don't do this to meee! So sad! Haha

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

You can't leave me hanging like this!!!!!!

A very stirring story with a heart wrenching conclusion. And, as a lot of the other comments have stated, a part II could be written. And I would read it. But I think I have my own ending envisioned and can accept that. Letting some stories "hang" with the reader either completing the story or filling in the gaps based upon the reader's own life experiences is OK. Again a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Best Regards,

Ralph

Seriously, this story is great. But I think some of us readers are about to die if you dont make this an on going thing.....

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER!!!! IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!

Part 2, Part 2, Part 2!!!!!!

Most people want a part 2 and i agree with them, but truthfully I fell as though you want us to decide the rest of the story. You said she left without her helmet, and Candy was even willing to miss flights, i bet Candy will fight for her. I just believe that. Atleast that is my part 2 to it.

I see why this one was a contest winner.

Heart-wrenching. Even though in the back of my mind I knew it was coming... My heart, it is broken! What a beautiful sad story. As much as I'd like to have a happy ending, I understand if that's just not in the cards... But oh, how gorgeously painful this is.

PLEASE!! PLEASE!! I BEG YOU.. PLEASE MAKE AN "ALEX" CHAPTER 2!! I WILL REALLY DIE IF YOU WOULDN'T :(( WE ARE ALL WAITING FOR IT.. SO PLEASE!! HEAR US!!

P.S.

I am really daydreaming about Alex right now. She's like, someone I am dreaming about for a long time.

you have to make a part 2 if you dont i will simply die of sadness at the way this one ended

for you to continue this even if you started it, more or less, 3 years ago. I love it!

A second part must be written. Enough said.

wow, wow, wow, I loved this story! please, don't stop writing:D

i am begging you for the second time please right a part 2 i'm dying from suspense, hopefully you see this and every other comment to write a part two.

Please continue this story! I have grown attached to these characters.

It would take a lot to work out a way for both to stay in Singapore and even more for both to do New York. But reality still bites and I like happy endings :(

You need to write a part 2! I love this story it would be so nice to see what happens with Alex and Candy<3

I adore this story I was so into it as for when it ended I was sadned by the thought there was no sequel! Please continu this ravishing story!!

Whoa! This is not how it should end is it???

For your first time its pretty darn good and left me wanting to read more.

Why did you end the story like this. When is the sequel out because am sure there must be a happy ending.....

More, please!!!!!!!!!!!!

when you forgo the sequel ...

I can tell your a really good author so I'm begging you please have a part two to this story, your killing me with anticipation. I really just want to find out what happens

hey, this was really good expect for the ending, i think that should have been a cliffhanger but not the be all and end all, if you call yourself a writer you should finish the dam story, really would love a 2,3,4 even 5 part to this

I think you deserved to win a prize, since your story was so good, good enough in fact to cause me pain. For those of us with advice for other resolutions, just remember that things like this do happen in real life. I know.

Was a descent story until close to the end, and then it started getting with me asking questions on how the two would get together, and would they return to NY together or remain in Asia. Then Candy simply allows Alex to walk out of the apartment & we get a disappointing end with Candy reading a letter. What happened, did the author get bored and just gave this story a quick ending so they could move on to the next story? If so, it's a shame, because this story deserved a better ending!

I would love to know what happened next. Are you going to continue this?

Up. Up. Up. Crash!

Awesome story! Very well written.

Please please please finish the story.

plase finish the story

You planning on killing me with cuteness?!?!?! XD This is officially my most favoritest story on here. The characters are amazing, you've got them so caught up in their own sexiness that they just OOZE pheromones, and damn it all, I cried at the ending. Make this a fantastic Valentines for them and please post the next chapter soon. XD I love their situation.

Wow this was really great, I loved it. Can't wait till the next chapter is posted!

You did not just leave me hanging like that. It was wonderfully written and incredibly intense. I'm still breathing hard. Oh, you have to finish this.

Like everyone else I'm looking for the next chapter.

please write another chapter to the love story

You need to finish this love story ...

I so love this story ive read it over and over. Each time I look for another chapter. I hope hope hope hope that there is going to be another chapter to this.

PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON

Was a wonderful story. Only thing I have to say is; where's the next chapter?! ;D

-James

I was enthralled, on the edge of my seat then nothing?! Please, please, please make a part 2!

This was so awesome! Excellent dialogue and characterization

great story needs an ending

It can't just end like this!!! I just scrolled through all 67 of these comments to see if you actually confirmed that there would be a part 2 or not and you never even mentioned it :(.... PLEASE DO A PART 2!!!!

How can you end it there? That's SO unfair! Love, love, LOVE your story, but oh my god! You don't play fair :(

No surprises this won the competition. Deservedly so.

Please tell me there is going to be a part 2... I Loved this story so much it is by far the best one I have ever read <3

ahhh where's the rest????? it just can't end like that. . . please say there's more. . .

I need to know what happens next. Please add another chapter. This is by far one of the best stories that I have ever read