All Comments on 'Alex and Penelope Ch. 08'

You've promised a shift in power...so I'm sticking with it...but right now this guy is a total douche! Letting the other girl jerk him off right across from her! Using her like a freakin doll. Not caring if she was getting pleasure or even if he was hurting her. Frankly, it was bordering on rape the last time when he just slammed into her and wasn't even hearing her cries. She can say she was getting pleasure, though I think that is more an effort to convince herself this is all good. Ugg. I'm sticking with for now, but at the moment I think this guy is a total selfish, self-entitled dick who is a masogenist pig who objectifies women. Other than that he seems like a decent person :P lol

....would go a long way toward retaining audience interest. Also, 2 or 3 days between chapters, you'll lose a lot of followers, me included. That may not be good. My voting is based on writing, and then content.