All Comments on 'Alex and Penelope Ch. 09'

I'll admit, I have a hard time coming back for more of this story. However, I just keep waiting for her to knock the shit out of him, whether physically or metaphorically, it doesn't matter. I'm just ready for a slight shift in power! Rosess, you still keep me coming back for more, so good job.

I'm getting pretty sick of Alex's bullshit. I have to admit I couldn't even read the entire eighth chapter, it pissed me off so much. I hope something changes soon or I am going to have to call it quits with this series.

I love the story. Please don't listen to the people asking you to change Alex. You're writing this story and the characters need to progress the way you envision. Some people are going to find the dynamic between Alex and Penelope uncomfortable and that is fine. The story does not need to be tailor made to appeal to everyone (as if that were even possible). Personally I don't think Alex is the beast that others seem to think he is. Is he arrogant and bit of male chauvinist ass? Yes, but definitely not a bad person and I think there obviously genuine emotion between him and Penelope. What makes this site great is that there is a broad category of sexual themes that can found. If the themes examined in this story are not enjoyed then that reader needs to move on to a new story.

The author has pointed out that we're supposed to dislike Alex. It's going to be interesting watching the mighty Alex grow more human and Penelope grow into her own.