All Comments on 'Alexandra Humbled'

Nicely written covering the all too familiar ring of status and position of society.

Nicely done

Lee

Not much to comment on, Lee. It's always kind of sad when these stories have to teach closet racists a lesson by proving every racist stereotype right by making the colored person in question a violent rapist and a lazy poor fucker who will expect and accept charity handouts. I mean really, how the fuck did she learn anything from that? It makes no sense, but that's what kind of story it is - Even a Genius White Woman Will Learn Her Place if Raped Properly. Unduly harsh, perhaps, as the author is clearly just following old story archetypes rather than examining where those stories go wrong and doing it better,

I doubt that's the kind of comment you were looking for, but honestly, when you start trolling the works of an author you like for praise, you have to accept criticism as well. Whatever you may think about this particular comment, it is constructive as it tells you exactly what is wrong and how to do it better.

I appreciate Anonymous's comment. I had my own concerns about racial stereotypes, but was more focused on getting into her head. Thanks for reading.

No victim really feels sympathy for her rapist while she's being raped. Now, she may orgasm, or otherwise physically enjoy the act, but rape is never going to magically turn into a pity fuck. The characters were trite and the dialog stilted, not to mention reinforcing old, racist stereotypes about black men raping white women.

Have Alexandra help him get through.his studies by giving him reward fucking and a baby bump from bbc. Plus her family will disown her and the two will become doctors while raising biracial children and she will donate her inheritance to get more gangbangers into college vice killing each other. And as a proper ending Alexandra gets her racist sister into bbc submission.

A really good story. If only they got together...