by naughtynikki112
Good, hot, story. But I feel the moneyshot (in both senses) is a little rushed.
Great start! Can't wait to read the next few chapters in the series..
I love it! It's so hot. I'd love to have gotten started like that, Being a whore for an older man. Please write the next chapter soon!!! I'm aching to read about what kind of depravity lies in the next chapter!!
You are gonna be a great little cumslut! Keep writing. Can't wait to hear what happens next. Would like to gag you with my cock.
Way to go gurl. Great story and had a bulge forming in my skirt right away. Please hurry with the next chapter. XXX Sally