All Comments on 'Alexis'

by miketodd

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WriteMeAnOrgasmWriteMeAnOrgasmover 14 years ago
You're right..

That did make me a little wet... It was very descriptive and realisic.. You described very well. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

elledeeelledeeover 14 years ago
Whoa

realized i was holding my breath towards the end

....such a good read

MistressRedRumMistressRedRumover 13 years ago
Not Afraid to Get Dirty

I loved that you weren't afraid to get raunchy there at the end with the dirty talk. I absolutely love that when it comes to sex myself. So, it's nice to see someone else use that with such confidence in their story.

Bravo!

MegantariatMegantariatover 13 years ago
Nice story.

Well written, nice description, and just the right amount of sex.

red23phonered23phoneabout 12 years ago
It does indeed

Your stuff absolutely makes the grade. I love the dirty talk with Alexis, and the morning sex with Jenn is the perfect mixture of sweet & sexy to get any reader hot.

Nice job!

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