by miketodd
That did make me a little wet... It was very descriptive and realisic.. You described very well. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
I loved that you weren't afraid to get raunchy there at the end with the dirty talk. I absolutely love that when it comes to sex myself. So, it's nice to see someone else use that with such confidence in their story.
Bravo!
Well written, nice description, and just the right amount of sex.
Your stuff absolutely makes the grade. I love the dirty talk with Alexis, and the morning sex with Jenn is the perfect mixture of sweet & sexy to get any reader hot.
Nice job!