All Comments on 'Alex's Awakening'

Totally loved it you should write more to it!!!!!

Good read thanks,

Like it! Continue story. Maybe she gets pregnant?

i'm melting!

reminds me of me and my mothers sister , we still havin hot times

Very simple editing mistakes. Capitalize names for one.

Made sounds like he was just coming home? She just woke him up.

I am not asking for a perfect story but these little things are easy to fix before posting if you take the time to read your own writing.

Give me a fucking break. Poetic license is one thing, this is garbage.

The storyline is very hot and the taboo sex is very explicit.

Short but very sweet and left me wanting to read more of their sexual affair.

I though her breasts were the size of oranges, not her nipples, and the description of her is quite visual.

Thanks for the good read.

Who's perspective is this even supposed to be from? It shifts right from first to a third-person perspective right at the beginning. WTF?

this is a fine story of hot motherfucking. Please write more.