by ariyanastories
It's well written, but uncomfortably true-to-life. This kind of thing is not outside the realm of possibility in such an enmeshed relationship between mother and son, which is ultimately what turned me off. Except for the blowjob, this scene describes many a night in my home as a teenager.
My dad's impotence exasperated mom's tendencies. Some say I was groomed. At first I thought I was taking advantage of her, she later confessed everything was planned. The nightly undressing in my view was condoned by dad.
Great short story! I agree with SWIM21, the scene is not outside of the realm of possibility. The mother wanted to make sure her son took her side in any argument and took it a little further than any manipulative parent would!
After reading your profile this makes a little more sense. I can see how some people would be made uncomfortable by the behavior of the mother in this story. But that is what art is about, isn't it? You've elicited a reaction and given us insight into something that is not totally comfortable. Thank you
Yes very good writing the whole scenario could be real *5* stars from me and thanks for writing.
She's going off the rails, but the sex is hot. Maybe it's because she's going off the rails ;).
Very much like my mom & I except she never gave me a bj. She would talk to me about their problems, I would listen & then she would put on a show for me as she never closed her bedroom door allowing me to spy on her from the bathroom. She was my first true love & still wish we'd done a lot more while we were both younger.