All Comments on 'Alex's Gifts Ch. 05'

I have been a reader of Literotica for years. I have read some sexy stories, but yours is the first to constitute a comment.

Please continue this series. I love everything about, and I can’t wait to read more!

I really enjoyed reading these first five chapters. The writing is very good and flows well. Some of the sex situations are slightly clunky and don't fit with the nice flow. That's my only constructive criticism.

You've got a great way of describing situations and body parts that give a clear view of the scene. Thanks for writing and hurry up with the next chapters, please.

The story is fantastic. Just hope it keeps going well for our growing hero. If anything blows up in his face it should just be girl cum.

I love everything about this story, please keep writing.

Just WOW !

This is simply the best.

Rapier

I was thinking Carrie was a Tease or something ?? Until this Chapter .. I still wonder what part She will play in this Story .. Magnus is a Very Good writer ..