by MagnusRhodes
I look forward to much more of this story. Very well written. Thank you
I have had a great time over the last few days reading this and I thank you for that. It would be great to hear about how his relationship with Jenny and his mother progress in the future. I feel there is plenty of scope for this story go on but please what is the point of Ben.
Enjoying your series enormously keeping up to date as much as possible keep it coming. I wish my name was Alex and my own businesses had done as well.
Ben No But Becky Heck Yes .. I felt You did a Pretty good job here .
This is the series I look forward to reading every time I log in. Once I started the first part I couldn't stop reading until I just finished this one. I agree that the Ben storyline is a little weird and could have been left out but you have written a masterful tale. I'm hoping mom gets involved seeing as how sad was with her and Lily.
i hope ben stays out of the story as much as possible. his whole thread is pointless. otherwise a fantastic series.
A good addition, but be aware that I'll be watching closely from now on ;-)
The gap of 10 days since the last chapter,lost the momentum of the story.I havent been able to get back into it as yet.I read the 1st page,didnt read the 2nd,and skipped thru page 3.
Maybe later tonight or tomorrow,I shall try again.
Enjoy this series. Would love to read about Casey and Lilly share Alex & Ben and Alex double penetrate and spit roast Megan and Ben's new girlfriend.