by Rallynoangels
That was very hot, graphically vivid and really intense. It was actually the concept that intrigued me and I was surprised at just how erotic I found it.
Thanks for sharing.
Tess (UK)
Ok, you got me Hooked! I defiantly need more of Jane's sex worker experiences. When does she get her first cock? I sure hope it's not a strapon attached to Anna. Maybe The cock of her daddy, or brother, uncle, neighbor, etc. I'll be watching for more.
That's the thing i love most about this site, every once in a while you get a piece of writing that is just a pure gem.
I wish you could turn this into a series, like an anthology, with Jane and Anna's relationship tying it all together, as she debases herself more and more over time.
Regardless, bravo on an excellent concept.
Would like to have a series of this as Jane explores what the AI will be sending to her. There are many aspects of a sex working including lesbian sex, bondage, gangbangs, interracial, and sex toys. Please make a series of this as she continues to progress in her "profession". Like the way the story was introduced and it is unique (I think) to a story line.
I've lost count how many times I've re-read this story, such a small concept execution but it feels Black Mirror in how big the world that it builds is
A potential humiliation tale thatβs . . . not. Janeβs joie de vivre sparkles and her chemistry with Anne bursts off the page. More please.
This is an awesome concept and is exceptionally well written. SEQUEL!
"Then she pulled down her panties and leaned over the kitchen table, straddling one of the corners with her clit and leaving her bear butt in the air".
I take it by this you mean she had a big hairy butt and tail like a bear? Otherwise it is bare butt.
Just having a little fun with you. Liked the premise of your story and the way her fiend was her first customer. Will be looking for more.
slight proof reading needed, but awesome story. I like the turnaround of the domination!
This is the best story I have read on this site. The concept and the writing are awesome. I hope to see more of Jane.