All Comments on 'Ali & I Ch. 01'

by luke90210

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SqueezeplaySqueezeplayalmost 14 years ago
Great start!

I am looking forward to future chapters. Nice job for your first story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good start

Ahh, everyone's dream woman, nice figure, loves sex and best of all, seems to really like the man she has persued. Now the hard part, will she still like him as she advances up the ladder in the company?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good at first

but the end was to much if she treated him like you said then there is a very good chance that he would hate her not love her especially since she didn't stop when he asked and even begged that would have ended the relationship on the spot keep it a little more realistic from now on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
language

Ali and ME...it should be, but...whose counting?

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