by Lovely_Emma_21
the best flavors. I can believe the characters and the story. And not even one quibble. More!
This had to be one of the best, if not the best, first time Lesbian stories I've ever read! I hope you keep writing.
I Love Reading Of "Other's" First Time Lesbian Sex. This Is A Very Seciting Story - Please Keep 'em Cuming
I Have Introduced Several Girls / Women To The Pleasure. I Find Introducing Anoyther Female To Lesbian Sex To Be Very Pleasurable
For Both of Us.
Kisses
Please make a second part to the story to let us know if Alice and Angel stay together.
Fabulous story that is just begging for part 2! I for one would love to read about the further seduction of Alice by Max & their budding romance. Always love a good love story full of eroticism & this is one of them!
wonderful, that's what this story is. Great storytelling. I love it when Fate brings people together like this. Estragon's comments are high praise and well deserved. I'm off to see if you've written more. If not, please do.
Will there be more to Alice and Max story? I would love more back story on Max.
What a hot story. Like the characters, I can't get enough, so please give us more - encore, encore
I enjoyed your story a great deal. What I liked the most is that Alice is a complete character, not a caricature of a person. The loving was hot, you also kept Max a mystery, which makes me want for a second part.
Thanks,
Brookell