All Comments on 'Alice Falls for a Stripper'

by Lovely_Emma_21

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ReverendCraigReverendCraigabout 13 years ago
Nice!

Thanks! Great story. There's nothing like your first time...

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Hot and Sweet

the best flavors. I can believe the characters and the story. And not even one quibble. More!

ScarlettLitScarlettLitabout 13 years ago
Great Story

This had to be one of the best, if not the best, first time Lesbian stories I've ever read! I hope you keep writing.

jessicaj64jessicaj64about 13 years ago
Divine!

Loved it! Thank you. Please keep writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great stuff

And very well written, from a 'different' PoV.

KathyFKathyFalmost 13 years ago
First Time Lesbian Sex

I Love Reading Of "Other's" First Time Lesbian Sex. This Is A Very Seciting Story - Please Keep 'em Cuming

I Have Introduced Several Girls / Women To The Pleasure. I Find Introducing Anoyther Female To Lesbian Sex To Be Very Pleasurable

For Both of Us.

Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another part

Please make a second part to the story to let us know if Alice and Angel stay together.

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Fabulous story that is just begging for part 2! I for one would love to read about the further seduction of Alice by Max & their budding romance. Always love a good love story full of eroticism & this is one of them!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago
Absolutely..

wonderful, that's what this story is. Great storytelling. I love it when Fate brings people together like this. Estragon's comments are high praise and well deserved. I'm off to see if you've written more. If not, please do.

jon99tjon99tover 11 years ago
nice

is there moor to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More please

Will there be more to Alice and Max story? I would love more back story on Max.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
Encore!!

What a hot story. Like the characters, I can't get enough, so please give us more - encore, encore

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

love your story its short simple and beautiful..... A

JanesKissJanesKissabout 9 years ago

Really loved your story.

BrookellBrookellover 8 years ago
Lovely story!

I enjoyed your story a great deal. What I liked the most is that Alice is a complete character, not a caricature of a person. The loving was hot, you also kept Max a mystery, which makes me want for a second part.

Thanks,

Brookell

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
I love it!

Just hope you'll continue this story at some point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I enjoyed this, well done.

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