All Comments on 'Alice or Unexpected Arrivals'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very good

I've been there and you got it dead right.

G5902G5902about 3 years ago

This a really great storyline and is well written! I hope that this is an introductory chapter and that we see more depth and buildup in following chapters!?

Crusader235Crusader235about 3 years ago
Nice

Nice start. Now finish the darn story.

deepnydiverdeepnydiverabout 3 years ago

I hope there will be more chapters. Well done.

chytownchytownabout 3 years ago
Nice Read***

Thanks for sharing.

LitboyblueLitboyblueabout 3 years ago

3rd story of yours 5*

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